The imagery tells your story so well! The slight nods of humor are also really good and add character. "It's one of the most uncomfortable things for me to do, next to talking about my feelings, or getting my blood drawn." Is such a good and relatable line. The only thing that I'd want to read more of are exact, specific feelings. The beginning really sets the tone and overall feeling, but as a reader I want to relate to more, in depth and deep feelings throughout the piece.